Score: 3

"Poor plot twist. Rushy feel, and Bad effects."

submission: Sonic Syythe World 16 +12

date: August 11, 2008

Cutting corners like that killed the entire series just like you did there. Killing characters like crazy is not a thing you should be doing if at all. These people are stupid (or at least I speak on the behalf of my character), and wouldn't react that slowly to a floating Z. Be a little more realistic next time.

Special effects are poor as well. Too many glow effects, as well as slow ones too.

Score: 8

"Pacing Slow, Characters Need Reinvented Looks."

submission: Sonic Cursed Elements

date: February 23, 2008

In terms of presentation, a vast improvement since SCD3, and you caught my eyes. But pacing is terribly slow, and the fights just were too slow. All the attacks seemed to have only happenned one at a time, but if you think about it, people would try to attack simultaneously. The jokes were either not funny or didn't even make sense. The characters, meh, you need to make them look more original. Artanis looks too much like Calaris, and the rest are just minor edits/splices.

Score: 7

"*Inserts a block with speed up engraved on it*"

submission: Sonic Blind Hero 3

date: April 24, 2006

Alright, Lukas you need some improvement.

Sound: Most of the sound heard in this episode comes from a game called Gradius. I don't mind, rather, I like that. The quality of sound wasn't my problem, but the some sounds don't fit for what they were used. Biggest example would be the Teleport using the Option Hunter alarm sound.

Graphics: My only complaint would be to set the anchor points closer together with the animation.

The Story is fine, nothing to worry about.

Overall, you need to speed up the movie more.

My suggested addtions? Voice Actors if possible, and , if you feel you're up to it, hand drawn animation. You can take baby steps with hand drawn stuff, starting with the key scene being hand drawn, and then moving slowly one episode after another.

Score: 6

"You have much well done, but the plot is too slow."

submission: Sonic Blind Hero

date: March 23, 2006

Yo, it's Roy from STF.

I must say, you have potential, but you made the plot too slow. The music I didn't like either, but I guess that's a taste issue.